Color me with bold strokes
blindly
And outside the lines
of preconceived notions
For one day I will fade
mutely
And all that will remain
are dusty memories
Drifting in the wind
soundlessly.
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6 comments:
Beautiful poem! I like how you touch on the senses in the italicized words. And the idea of coloring outside the lines to describe yourself is cool!
Very cool, gentle, beautifully phrased around the idea.
Strong poem.
I like the emphatic effect of italicizing those 3 words. It works
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I will always color you with bold strokes, Lakota.
Well done and nice structural use of the font to systematize and to highlight the parts.
Two words come to mind when I read this...
taut
(and)
powerful
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I like the way you formed it.
ship-wreck
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